Aberforth's Avatar posted a comment on Thursday 14th June 2007 10:13am for Chapter the Second

I like this very much. I am especially enjoying trying to figure out which motives belong to whom -- and which motives we haven't seen yet.

Thanks for sharing.

Decumo9 posted a comment on Thursday 14th June 2007 9:53am for Chapter the Second

not gonna lie, i am confused beyond confusion, therefore i await the next chapters quite eagerly.

Sheepstamper posted a comment on Thursday 14th June 2007 7:50am for Chapter the Second

Interesting developments........

Kaerion posted a comment on Thursday 14th June 2007 7:43am for Chapter the Second

Wow, this is turning out to be a *very* interesting fic! I wasn't really sure what to think after the first chapter, though I'm thinking that's more because you wanted to confuse us a little, than anything else, but now we're finally starting to get some answers. :)

You're doing an absolutely masterful job of showing, instead of telling, us those answers though, and making us really think to figure them out, and if you want us to look forward to the next chapters, that's definitely the right way to do it! Of the "big mysteries" that're still there (other than the ones you can't explain until the very end of the story, without ruining it), I think the biggest one is the identity of the Dreamweaver, whether or not she really is Millicent Bulstrode or just took her image for the dreams, but I'm hoping we'll get that answered when she meets up with Hermione. :)

Keep up the great work though, you're really breaking new ground when it comes to HP fanfiction, here!

Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Thursday 14th June 2007 7:06am for Chapter the Second

Wow, another great chapter here, and loving the detail that's going into it. I really look forward to what is going to happen, and what this will do when things go south as they seem to in Harry's life, and what will be the outcome of these plans.

MrRobertsIII posted a comment on Thursday 14th June 2007 6:20am for Chapter the Second

then fed the residual bits to Dementors
-Excellent idea, never thought of that

Entilzah posted a comment on Thursday 14th June 2007 6:14am for Chapter the Second

Goodness gracious! Twists and turns... plans within plans. What a fun read!

amulder posted a comment on Thursday 14th June 2007 5:56am for Chapter the Second

cute. wheels within wheels. cross within doublecross.

going good, John!

Wolfric posted a comment on Thursday 14th June 2007 5:42am for Chapter the Second

Well as they used to say the plot thickens. I am intrigued. Thanks for writing. W.

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Thursday 14th June 2007 5:15am for Chapter the Second

Twists, turns, and convolutions. Exccellent chapter. I can see several ways it can go and sort of want most of them to happen, which is impossible.

Cheers!

Jim_xinu posted a comment on Thursday 14th June 2007 5:11am for Chapter the Second

Hmmm. The plot thickens. :-)

We have Snape and, I'd assume, Draco Malfoy who somehow found Harry in protective coma--quite likely they attacked him in the first place.

Gretel is presumably Millie (which you spelled Milli at least once) and seems to be trying to get info about Horcruxes out of Harry for them. But then she calls, presumably, Hermione...

Good chapter, it's really got me thinking. :-)

Thanks for sharing this with us.

Amamama posted a comment on Thursday 14th June 2007 5:05am for Chapter the Second

Ok... she's getting in touch with Hermione, I hope? Our Dreamweaver seems to be walking a tight rope, but if she manages to get Harry back to the world and Severus and possibly-Draco out of it, that would be a really good thing. I wonder how Harry will react to Millicent when he eventually wakes up and meets her for real - if that ever happens. Sneaky magic, dreamweaving, but very fascinating. Fascinating story you're cooking up here.

Cheers!

uthamm posted a comment on Thursday 14th June 2007 4:54am for Chapter the Second

Wow! I see what you mean about more and less clear. So Harry is in some sort of coma because his 'storm shield' kicked in as a result of something Snape and Draco did to him, Millicent has contacted Hermione for the 'rescue' and Voldamort is dead? Wait, so who is Draco going to rule with? ARRGH!

Close?

Christopher Patton posted a comment on Thursday 14th June 2007 4:37am for Chapter the Second

Incredible first two chapters so far. I have to admit that while I like both the dream story and the outside story, I am enjoying the dream story more. It is a different spin on things from what I've seen before in post-Hogwarts stories.

I'll be eagerly looking forward to more of this to come.