Lara Quinn posted a comment on Saturday 15th June 2019 12:41pm

Great story. Well developed plot with gradual revelation of what was going on. I enjoyed the Millicent in this story.

Jimbocous posted a comment on Tuesday 12th February 2019 3:56pm

Thanks! Enjoyed this, nicely done.

Wanderer posted a comment on Saturday 29th July 2017 12:44am

I appreciate the heads up on the... companion (not sequel?).

You put a lot of character revelations into a few words, and that's a good thing. I look forward to more of these characters. M

Wanderer posted a comment on Saturday 29th July 2017 12:31am

Ok, now I'm getting excited, but still confused... but not as much. Mostly. But still having fun :) M

Wanderer posted a comment on Saturday 29th July 2017 12:16am

I'm not sure what's going on here but I like it. *pleasantly confused* M

Gary the Grouch posted a comment on Saturday 11th February 2017 2:42pm

Interesting story: it's definitely not what it seems to be on the surface.

Despite the best efforts of the characters in the story, it is mostly a happy ending . . . except for a couple of characters whose opinion does not matter.

Well-written and enjoyable!

Gary the Grouch posted a comment on Saturday 11th February 2017 12:42pm

I've only read a few stories with Bulstrode in them. Most are very good, and there are some delightful plot lines that are possible.

It's hard to tell yet where this is going, but it seem to have a plot inside a plot. The writing is uniformly very good, and the author is effective at sharing the story, with an excellent mix of discourse and exposition.

Very enjoyable so far!

ILikeToRead posted a comment on Tuesday 8th March 2016 8:12pm

Fun story and a good read. Interesting story concept and one I've not read before. Thanks for sharing!

tcl7189 posted a comment on Saturday 18th October 2014 2:21pm

Too Kool !!!

Nytefyre posted a comment on Monday 25th February 2013 8:15am

Interesting.. if it wasn't for the author's note, I wouldn't have picked up on it quite as quickly - probably not until closer to the end. Nice juxtaposition of the dream world with the action of the real world. Off to read the companion.

Thanks for posting.

KirijamaScion posted a comment on Saturday 8th May 2010 3:50am

awww come on... where's the follow up... need to know what happened.

Charles Newton posted a comment on Thursday 26th November 2009 5:06am

Interesting-- is all this part of the Dreamweaver and the plan formed 'in his orderly mind', and will Harry realize this?
For the answer to these and other questions I will stay tuned.
Very good hook to this.

Kokopelli replied:

keep reading ;-)

GryffindorDragon posted a comment on Thursday 5th March 2009 3:51am

Very nice story. Not exactly a pairing I'd like to see. But you provide a nice story line with some interesting twists.

Kokopelli replied:

The point was established in the first chapter - nothing is as it seems - an impossible situation (like cold fusion) yet you get sucked into the illusion.  

Or at least, that was what I was aiming at.

GryffindorDragon posted a comment on Thursday 5th March 2009 3:34am

I take it the "younger one" was Draco.

Kokopelli replied:

Oh yes, and he gets his too.

GryffindorDragon posted a comment on Thursday 5th March 2009 1:15am

Oh, I forgot the opening scene. With the Dreamweaver the whole thing with Millicent may not be real, right?

Kokopelli replied:

Indeed - some of it was real, but most was not.

GryffindorDragon posted a comment on Thursday 5th March 2009 1:01am

Millicent?!? And the hero so easily shunted off out of the way? Odd premise, but well-written and enjoyable.

Aelita posted a comment on Wednesday 30th January 2008 10:00am

This was very interesting thank you for the great story.

Kokopelli replied:

Thanks for reading.

Anaknisatanas posted a comment on Friday 27th July 2007 12:03pm

I really enjoyed this piece. So many times I feel that Millicent is overlooked. I really enjoyed how you portrayed her.

Deborahsu posted a comment on Saturday 14th July 2007 11:56am

VERY well done. I was able to follow what was real & what wasn't pretty easily once the Dreamweaver woke up following the first dream. I did NOT guess that it was Millicent, though!

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Tuesday 10th July 2007 8:21pm

Nice work. If you'd drawn it out a little more
you could have really built up the tension!