JoFarries posted a comment on Wednesday 30th May 2007 5:03pm

I like it! Hardly anything is ever done with Millicent, she makes a good character. I'm looking forward to more!

Jim_xinu posted a comment on Wednesday 30th May 2007 4:55pm

Well.

First I read the description and thought: Draco/Harry slash! Run away!

But then I remembered what the "nsns" in the URL stands for and I thought: Kokopelli does great work, and it does say Fluff. I'll give a try.

And I read it. And I enjoyed it.

And then I see again at the bottom the line: "nothing is as it seems in this story".

Which rather killed my enthusiasm, since it suggests that one of them (probably Millicent, but then "nothing is as it seems") is playing the other.

But again I remembered, Kokopelli does great work. And I trust him to not write pure, unredeemed angst. :-)

Thanks for sharing this with us.

bmatsea posted a comment on Wednesday 30th May 2007 3:53pm

i'm not quite sure what happening at the begining but this is a great story

uthamm posted a comment on Wednesday 30th May 2007 2:54pm

"bear with me a few more chapters, it will become more and less clear" . . You know, this is just . . .evil.

More and less clear? Good story - Millicent's line is priceless: "are you proud of all the decisions you made between 11 and 17?" Story of all our lives I'd wager. You do a great job with the obscure ships (loved Lost & Found). Looking forward to more.

Manatheron posted a comment on Wednesday 30th May 2007 2:49pm

Nice start! or is it a one shot? I'd like to know what was up with that bit about the cold in the beginning, as well as what the dreamweaver is and what it has to do with the rest of the story.

AutumnHeart posted a comment on Wednesday 30th May 2007 1:49pm

Intriguing. I like what you've done with Millicent, and look forward to seeing where you take this.

MrRobertsIII posted a comment on Wednesday 30th May 2007 12:59pm

a Dreamweaver
-This is a but a dream. Poor Harry.

Excellent job with Millie! I'm glad to see you've taken up fanfic again.

MarinePotterfan posted a comment on Wednesday 30th May 2007 12:57pm

Harry has been brainwashed and Ginny is still alive and no one knows where he is.

MPF

Lon Huey posted a comment on Wednesday 30th May 2007 11:43am

Well, I was going to say it was a sweet little story..............until I saw your notes. Nothing is as it seems, eh? Jerk the tip and set the hook. Can't wait to see the rest.

noahshonor posted a comment on Wednesday 30th May 2007 10:55am

Yes! More please.

DJ posted a comment on Wednesday 30th May 2007 8:18am

OK it seemed clear Harry was in a bad spot and flashing back to a good time in his life. When he was traing and met someone who out grew the fat kid thing from when she was a teen and also grew up. Did I miss something? Well I look foward to finding out grate job.

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Wednesday 30th May 2007 7:24am

So, you really do have a Harry/Millicent. I'm just glad I posted first. That way I can say I was first when you're the best - er, better - even my reviews need a beta reader.

Seriously though, the dreamweaver made me think this isn't really happening, and then you notes screams it out loud. And of course the "more and less clear" comment makes everything as clear as mud.

Great start to a captivating tale. Cheers!

Bedrup posted a comment on Wednesday 30th May 2007 6:27am

Ok. I ´m interested.