Comet Moon posted a comment on Friday 19th March 2010 1:02pm

Sorry

Ends here for me

Ja ne

JIm

Crys posted a comment on Friday 19th March 2010 12:09pm

"various varieties of farm filth" ? How very alliteritive *laugh*

> "How's that spelled?"
> "With difficulty"
*snicker*

Interesting little series of snapshots. Doesn't really need anything more. Covering a lot of time without feeling rushed.

Even though it's incomplete, it's a nice picture you've painted for their futures.

Clell65619 posted a comment on Friday 19th March 2010 12:08pm

- Very nice, a midlife romance sweat and more than a bit... needy. I'd like to see more of this.

amulder posted a comment on Friday 19th March 2010 10:35am

John!!

Good to "hear" from you again. Fun to be reminded of Abelard and Jasmine. I'd like to see Jasmine again. Oh well, I know where to find her if I want to re-read.

Thanks for bringing at least a bit of closure to this.
best wishes!
...art

ps: "which was regrettable, as I’m really good at high dudgeon."
Great line!