DJ posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd August 2006 10:46am

AHHHH What the h**l he split in the middle of what she was saying, that's over the top even for Harry. Nice work I hope you put up part 3 soon.

James13 posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd August 2006 10:41am

Wow, nice chapter.

Now, Gabby's got a choice between duty, honor an what she wants. Sucks to be her :)

Kokopelli replied:

Which, of course, is part of what makes her such a complement to Harry.

Deborahsu posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd August 2006 10:40am

Harry just HAS to jump to conclusions with no evidence, doesn't he? Poor Gabby. Maybe Harry will take some time to actually think, realize what a prat he is, and find her this time?

Mayjest posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd August 2006 9:59am

This is actually turning into a good story. Not what I expected from a title involving 'drabble'. Keep it up!

Kokopelli replied:

You were expecting a train wreck perhaps?

hoser41 posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd August 2006 9:53am

Man, great work so far. This seems more like real life than alot of the other stuff that I have read.

Kokopelli replied:

Yeah, I'm just overrun by Veela women who adore me . . . (not!)

Fasor posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd August 2006 8:20am

a very nice story :)

Jim_xinu posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd August 2006 8:03am

Excellent chapter. I'd be curious to know more about how Hermione came out of her coma.

The idea of Harry using (properly prescribed) muggle depression medication is very interesting. Considering his life, it's not hard to believe that he has permanent neurochemical imbalances.

Regarding the split, I know you need to set up the plot point, but I can't help but think that Gabrielle would know him a little better by then.

Thanks for sharing with us.

Kokopelli replied:

a) an Empathic healer on loan from France;

b) write what you know;

c) Gabrielle has her own issues, but please remember that by this time she's known Harry for four months, and she's having objectivity problems because of her infatuation.

You're welcome.

Deborahsu posted a comment on Tuesday 1st August 2006 8:43am

This is a nice start ... no, not "nice" ... "nice" is really too bland to mean anything at all. Let me try that again. Great start! I do look forward to what happens next. Is Hermione really in her mind, or was that a trick, or was she discharged with damage still present, but able to function on her own? How will Harry get past his love with Ginny, if Ginny keeps showing up? Is Gabrielle just trying to get into Harry's pants, or is she looking for more?

I hope we'll find out soon. AND that we'll get another chapter from SfSY soonest!

Kokopelli replied:

Gabrielle would LOVE to get into Harry's pants, but no, that's not what's driving this bus.

hoser41 posted a comment on Tuesday 1st August 2006 5:53am

I like this. It's not your typical after the war story where everybody live happily ever after. I like the tone and the pace of the story.

millercommamatt posted a comment on Monday 31st July 2006 2:44am

For the record, you have the best disclaimer in the business.

-millercommamatt

Kokopelli replied:

I copyright all of my stories, to prevent (discourage) borrowing by others.   My position is that against all the world I have a right to my stories, but that right is subordinate to JKR and her licensees.  

brad posted a comment on Sunday 30th July 2006 11:05pm

Nice. *So* pleased you have Hermione recovered; "she's in her right mind again", great sentence, as was Harry's reaction. I'm hoping to see a great big reunion between the two of them and the Trio, huge hugs all 'round.

I'd asked about apparation as a means to rescue Gabrielle on your blog; I see you had that covered at the end of the chapter.

Looking forward to more, of course!

Kokopelli replied:

You see raw drafts on my LJ - I'd planned all of this from the beginning, but I just hadn't written it yet.   I'm about three pages into the next section.

J

Ken Warner posted a comment on Sunday 30th July 2006 3:55pm

an excellent piece of work, somehow the trio of Harry, Hermione and Gabrielle seems to fit very nicely together.

Thanks so much for sharing - it is nice to see some new work, I have very much enjoyed all of your stories so far.

warm regards

Cliff Bryner posted a comment on Sunday 30th July 2006 9:05am

Truly enjoyable as always. Please continue.

The Resident posted a comment on Sunday 30th July 2006 4:42am

Ok... The Song of Roland... Hmmm. Right... Sure they did. Anyway, it's a nice start. There are a lot of HP pairings I like and HPGD is one I see too seldom. You've got a good thing going and I'm eager to see where it goes. Keep up the, as always, great work.

DJ posted a comment on Sunday 30th July 2006 12:48am

Nice work I look foward to more of this story arc.

Shadow High Angel posted a comment on Sunday 30th July 2006 12:25am

Love the story, can't wait to read what comes next.

CootiePatootie posted a comment on Saturday 29th July 2006 11:30pm

This is bitter, and sweet. I like your Gabby - she rocks! :-)

The dream visit was quite nice...I like the "forks of time" explanation

I do hope to see Hermione; I like her character, and I think seeing it develop into an adult character instead of a somewhat bossy, brilliant but insecure schoolgirl is one of the best things about fanfic.

As always, reading things you write is ALWAYS worth my time.

Cheers,

Cassie P

sugarbear68 posted a comment on Saturday 29th July 2006 11:29pm

I love this! Glad to hear from you again. Harry/Gabrielle is one of the non-H/G ships I like for Harry. This sounds like a bit of fun and I can't wait to read more.

~sb68~

Jamie46 posted a comment on Saturday 29th July 2006 10:54pm

I like this story :) *smile* Thanks for distracting me on my last night in my apartment, when I should be cleaning. ;) hehehe

Patches posted a comment on Saturday 29th July 2006 9:23pm

Dear Kokopelli, Thanks for writing. I really enjoy all the things all of you write. I think I've read almost everything on this web site now waiting for all of you to update your "big" stories. This is a cool story line in itself. It makes sense that Harry would leave if so many of his friends were hurt or dead. He would be kicking himself for not killing Moldishorts sooner before he lost all his friends and his love. I look forward to more of this story but I am really looking forward to updates on all the big stories on this website. Thanks for another look at Potterverse. pms