nodrog451 posted a comment on Saturday 29th July 2006 9:12pm

Great beginning! I'll be looking forward to the other parts. PLEASE don't take too long to update the story! I typically don’t read works that are in progress because I hate to wait — what can I say, I’m a typical American. That said, of all the fanfic authors I've read I enjoy you stories most. Until now, I've refrained from posting reviews of your other stories simply due to the fact that I just enjoy reading. I'm not very technically minded when it comes to language, so I have no real ability to critique you work. However, I really do enjoy your work and want to let you know that. Thank you!

noylj posted a comment on Saturday 29th July 2006 6:49pm

I certainly hope you don't leave it at this!
Wish I could find a bunch of Harry/Fleur and Harry/Gaby fics, so I certainly hope this isn't the end...

zac posted a comment on Saturday 29th July 2006 5:36pm

this is a wonderful start to a story and a great plot device.

Lira posted a comment on Saturday 29th July 2006 5:33pm

Ooooh! Love this! Continue it soon, please! There are way too few decent Harry/Gabrielle-stories out there!!!!

KLGreen posted a comment on Saturday 29th July 2006 3:48pm

very well put together can not wait to see what you come up with

David Thacker posted a comment on Saturday 29th July 2006 3:47pm

Great story.Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.

KateHC posted a comment on Saturday 29th July 2006 3:43pm

Gabrielle is all grown up. Makes for an interesting story.

Kinsfire posted a comment on Saturday 29th July 2006 2:57pm

How the heck did Hermione come out in her right mind? (I am NOT complaining, as a Hermione fan, mind you. *grin*)

I was right about her Sleeping Beauty bunny. (That's inspired you (sort of), Tim, and a couple others, I think.) I feel proud of her. (Then again, she's the better writer of our duo, so it's rather easy to be proud of her crafting skills, even when it comes to bunnys.)

Jim_xinu posted a comment on Saturday 29th July 2006 2:42pm

Nice little piece. I was amused that he's up in Denali--I was there last month. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Has Dorothy published any of her version?

kittykatluver posted a comment on Saturday 29th July 2006 2:42pm

Pretty nice! It did seem a bit rushed, but it was still quite good! I hope you churn this little baby out quickly. Looking forward to it,
Ol