Gardengirl posted a comment on Friday 8th September 2006 4:57am for Hide and Seek

Excellent, as always! Looking forward to seeing that powder disperse - next chapter, maybe?

Cheers,
Michelle

Jim_xinu posted a comment on Friday 8th September 2006 4:56am for Hide and Seek

Advancing the plot a bit more and the relationship a bit less this chapter, it appears. Still, it's all good. :-)

The Resident posted a comment on Friday 8th September 2006 4:37am for Hide and Seek

Poor Neville. You just had to set Hermione on a problem, didn't you? Oh, well, it was an enjoyable scene. The hide and seek scene with Harry and Gabriel was cute as well. Keep up the great work. Hoping the girls are found soon and that they are in good shape.

Chris1 posted a comment on Friday 8th September 2006 4:29am for Hide and Seek

Nice chapter. Loved the interaction betwen the four at the end. :D

Chris

Ken Warner posted a comment on Friday 8th September 2006 4:09am for Hide and Seek

This is such an excellent story - even if the chocolate sauce does stay disappointingly off-stage.
The scene with the Abbot was excellent - very smoothly done.

Thanks for your tremendous story telling, and kindness in sharing it with us.

Kokopelli replied:

The outline for the remainder of this story is posted on my LJ.   You'll note that the final scene is called "Chocolate in the kitchen."

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Friday 8th September 2006 3:46am for Hide and Seek

Ah, I like this final version. I can see at least some of the tweaks made between what was in your LJ and this one and I agree they're for the better. I get the feeling the next couple episodes are going to be "interesting" as Harry and Gabrielle go into action.