By kokopelli
Reviews
snuffles007 posted a comment on Monday 11th September 2006 12:50pm
A nice little chapter with some witty banter. Keep the updates coming!
BJH posted a comment on Saturday 9th September 2006 12:18pm
So, how will Gabrielle react when she finds out that the Reverand Father married them and not just blessed them?
I'm assuming that Harry doesn't tell her until after the kids are saved and maybe not until someone starts talking about wedding plans. "Wedding? Why bother, we've been married since we talked to the Abbot!" I'm sure Molly will take that well.
BJH
Kokopelli replied:
I did give that some thought, but no, he wasn't marrying them - not exactly.
J
gaul2000 posted a comment on Saturday 9th September 2006 10:51am
great chapter, take care
atlantis-rob posted a comment on Saturday 9th September 2006 4:01am
Awesome chapter K. Great job with the visit to the monks, that was really well done and great to see hermione and nev together! excellent dialogue as usual! Cheerio!
HermioneGreen posted a comment on Saturday 9th September 2006 2:49am
Awesome!!! now that Gabrielle can discern a signature that has been scrambled, hopefully it won't be much longer . . . what did that monk really do? was it some sort of handfasting? keep up the good work . . .
Thanks for sharing
'Mione
MarinePotterfan posted a comment on Saturday 9th September 2006 1:41am
I really like this story, and I await your next update.
MPF
Prince Charon posted a comment on Friday 8th September 2006 8:02pm
Nice.
[I]"My apologies in advance, Neville," Harry said. "Tomorrow would be fine. I think it’s time that I get sleeping beauty back to her flat in Marseilles. Ready to go, love?"
Gabrielle didn’t answer. She’d leaned forward, resting her head on her crossed arms, and fallen asleep.[/I]
Very cute.
More soon, please.
saugart posted a comment on Friday 8th September 2006 6:35pm
This is a great conceit: The notion of hide and seek. Congratulations.
DJ posted a comment on Friday 8th September 2006 2:30pm
Nice work. :)
CootiePatootie posted a comment on Friday 8th September 2006 1:55pm
Good, and oh so sweet. I love the prayer - it is very much like a prayer of blessing our reverend would do when I was an unlapsed Methodist; whenever one of the students was going away, he would bless us and pray. And the backward sign of the cross cracked me up...it is just something I can so easily imagine. Your description of the Meze was not nearly detailed enough...I'm hungry and I can't go make any if I don't know what sorts of things go in it!
Now I understand about the tracking and Harry's signature. I must've had a blonde (no offense to anyone) moment there.
An excellent update as always, I hate to come to the end of your chapters, because they are so good I don't want them to end.
Ta,
Cassie
seeker77 posted a comment on Friday 8th September 2006 11:53am
I have been a huge fan since I found TLOS and onto SFSY (which is long over due for an update) This as much as I was shocked by Ginny's death it was still nice of her to "drop" in. Also the religous undertones are a nice touch in an otherwise outstanding story. Thank you for shareing your "lonely hobbie". I look forward to your updats and I check your LJ frequently.
Musings of Apathy posted a comment on Friday 8th September 2006 10:53am
Great chapter. I love how this is going. I like the way you are slowly elaborating on all of the details, rather than giving us a college education in one go.
Thanks for writing.
Mike (MoA)
Donald McLeod posted a comment on Friday 8th September 2006 9:05am
Good, it keeps the interst and moves to solve the problem. thank you look for more.
Crys posted a comment on Friday 8th September 2006 8:02am
You know, depending on how sneaky you want to play it, Abbot Anthony COULD have performed a marriage ceremony in the midst of all of that. Cord over clasped hands and all. And her "Amen" could well have been construed as acceptance. Of course, HE is the one holding up the parade.
Snarky girl. That "Saturday" line of hers :)
Fun story.
Amamama posted a comment on Friday 8th September 2006 7:25am
Hmm, now this sounds interesting and rather intriguing - what's the story of their past, with Malfoy Manor and all? I look forward to seeing H&G using their combined abilities, together with some F&G stuff, to take down the whole cartell(?) of non-law-abiding idiots and nincompoops. And bring home some lost lambs at the same time.
Thanks for sharing - you truly are a wonderful author!
Berte
KateHC posted a comment on Friday 8th September 2006 7:02am
Ah, Kokopelli.
Another chapter packed full of hints to solve the mystery.
I like Abbot Anthony a great deal. You do clergy well.
This is a lovely blessing-"Heavenly Father, bind their lives together, watch over them, and grant them your grace, your peace, and your love. Amen."
They may need some protection, as well.
Patches posted a comment on Friday 8th September 2006 6:52am
Short but really informative. I really like the way you covered so many topics so well in a very short amount of time. Dinner, tracking in Harry's field, meeting Father Anthony, visiting Hermione & Neville! Wow! But very good. I look forward to the next chapter. Thanks for writing. pms
Gardengirl posted a comment on Friday 8th September 2006 4:57am
Excellent, as always! Looking forward to seeing that powder disperse - next chapter, maybe?
Cheers,
Michelle
Jim_xinu posted a comment on Friday 8th September 2006 4:56am
Advancing the plot a bit more and the relationship a bit less this chapter, it appears. Still, it's all good. :-)
Sterling posted a comment on Monday 11th September 2006 9:38pm