Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Thursday 31st August 2006 4:52pm

*chuckle* By Chekov's Law, that nullfier field is going to play a part in the denoument: I'll be interested in seeing just how. This is a nice extension to the previous segment.

Patches posted a comment on Thursday 31st August 2006 4:07pm

Thank you so much for your prompt update. I really do like this story and I am eager to read more on the subject. I like the romance and the attention to details of the search for the lost girls. I look forward to more soon. pms

DJ posted a comment on Thursday 31st August 2006 3:29pm

Cool cool This is a awsome fic keep it up.

HermioneGreen posted a comment on Thursday 31st August 2006 2:09pm

A most enjoyable chapter . . . I expecially like the "I’m more of a nuzzle and grope guy personally, rather than, uh, the bind and beat" line . . .

Keep up the good work . . .

Thanks for sharing

'Mione

Gardengirl posted a comment on Thursday 31st August 2006 1:43pm

*sighs happily* Thanks, John, I needed that! (and I noticed that the only spelling hiccup I'd seen on your LJ was already corrected - well done!)

Can hardly wait for more. LURVE the banter between Harry and Gabrielle - it's ever so much fun.

Kokopelli replied:

The LJ is my replacement for my pre-beta group, which I used for writing TLOS.   The LJ readers spot my obvious glitches and give me feedback - then I correct the stuff and send it to my fabulous beta.

J

saugart posted a comment on Thursday 31st August 2006 9:16am

A pleasure to read this next chapter. Thank you for writing.

I was touched. It felt as if I were there.

gaul2000 posted a comment on Thursday 31st August 2006 5:39am

chapter was good, enjoyed it, byes

Prince Charon posted a comment on Thursday 31st August 2006 2:02am

Very interesting. I like how their pacing themselves.

Thank you for the update.

More soon, please.

Graup posted a comment on Wednesday 30th August 2006 2:06pm

Hmmm - transition chapter, but you kept it interesting.

Graup posted a comment on Wednesday 30th August 2006 1:44pm

Enjoyed this piece, and the translation of all the Veela tendencies, et al.

I haven't seen that written anywhere, and yours was quite believable.

Thanks for sharing it.

snuffles007 posted a comment on Wednesday 30th August 2006 10:45am

Great chapter! I liked the surprise engagement. Keep the updates coming!

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Wednesday 30th August 2006 9:54am

Interesting!! This is going to be a somewhat different "courtship" since they've already agreed on the basics. I rather suspect, though, that bweing teamed together in the field is going to expose them to aspects of each other they normally would not have seen for some while.

Jim_xinu posted a comment on Wednesday 30th August 2006 9:15am

Hmmm... Not the way I expect you'd end up going. I was expecting either an interruption of their romancing or a skip ahead to after they'd solved the case.

This different, and quite probably better. :-)

I was a bit surprised that Harry let all of his reservations from the previous chapter go quite that quickly. But the proposal by note passing was very cute.

All in all, excellent. Thanks for sharing it with us.

UdderPD posted a comment on Wednesday 30th August 2006 6:54am

This was excellent, it did however have one serious error. It was only a quarter of the required length.

Keep up the good work.

TTFN UdderPD

Viridian posted a comment on Wednesday 30th August 2006 5:44am

Nicely done. That was one of the funnier marriage proposals I'vee seen. You'd think Gabby would've anticipated that though... but the shocke factor was worth it.

The memories from Gabby's Beuxbatons days were handled nicely as well. Harry is being more than just a prize in the relationship, which is good.

Looking forward to the next installment!

HermioneGreen posted a comment on Wednesday 30th August 2006 5:19am

Another fantabulous chapter. I look forward to the next chapter.

Keep up the good work

Thanks

'Mione

haphazard1 posted a comment on Wednesday 30th August 2006 2:37am

Another excellent chapter -- I'm enjoying this story quite a lot.

The scribbling back and forth proposal was delightful, and I like the way you're writing Gabrielle. I'll look forward to seeing the results of Harry's "tasks".

CootiePatootie posted a comment on Wednesday 30th August 2006 1:41am

What a sweet proposal. Your take on the tracking/empathy/Veela is quite interesting, though it does make sense. Tracking someone would work best if you were intimately familiar with his or her signature. Normally that intimacy would come with a deep personal relationship, but I can certainly see the logic of using an Occlumency-like skill (the Veela power) to get it. Cool, in other words!

Harry's such a good boyfriend/fiance. Make sure he stays that way!

I like the bit about just being engaged that very day; the erotic lump of magic is pretty funny too.

Cheers,

Cassie

Amamama posted a comment on Tuesday 29th August 2006 11:32pm

They do move fast when they first decide, don't they? Lovely fic, as usual I really enjoy all the layers you have in you cake. Right now I could really use a RL Tracker as my cousin has gone missing... you don't happen to have a Gabrielle up your sleeve, do you? Guess not. One thing's for sure - I have a very good idea about the way Madame Artzai feels.

Thanks for sharing - it's good to have something else to focus on.

DiverSam posted a comment on Tuesday 29th August 2006 11:27pm

Very good. I love the engagement scene.