UdderPD posted a comment on Saturday 19th August 2006 3:55am

Excellent.

I read the first few hundred words of this this morning and realised that I had not read TL&FT. However it did not stop me from reading to the end of this chapter.

I have now read all of the available story and as stated above it is Excellent.

TTFN UdderPD

Sonicdale posted a comment on Friday 18th August 2006 11:21pm

Just when I thought that this story had gone as far as it could go, you take it up another notch.

Bam!

Good work. I especially like that Harry's not All-Knowing and such. But I hope you get to give him moments to shine. I mean, he's not the 'special hit wizard from Paris' for nothing. :)

I always liked seeing Harry kick ass. Hopefully you'll give us some here.
... with a side helping of Veela taming/mating/something. I like the Veela expansion idea. Makes Gabby and Fleur more personable.

Good work.

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Friday 18th August 2006 2:31pm

*whistles Mission:Impossible TV theme* My, my, now we get to see how well the two of them integrate as a team. Anyone care to bet on who gets surprised the most, their co-workers or the bad guys?

I'm loving it, my friend.

Gardengirl posted a comment on Friday 18th August 2006 11:49am

Hurray! So glad to see more from you, John! Hope your birthday was delightful and fed your muse well. Be well, and keep writing ~

KateHC posted a comment on Friday 18th August 2006 10:23am

Welcome back.

So that's how it works with hybrids.

I am looking forward to the next chapter.

DJ posted a comment on Friday 18th August 2006 8:39am

Well done I hope you keep the story line going. The chocolate sauce would be nice but keeping this story line going would be better. :)

David Patricks posted a comment on Friday 18th August 2006 7:21am

Alright!! I was frustrated by your author's notes at the end of Lost and Found -- there was just too much good material on the cutting floor. You've got a great gift for storytelling, John, and I'm relieved and happy that you'll share that gift through the rest of the story with the rest of us.

Shadow High Angel posted a comment on Friday 18th August 2006 7:20am

Great to have more of these stories, loved it, the Veela explination was one of the best i've ever read, can't wait for more.

Jim_xinu posted a comment on Friday 18th August 2006 6:51am

Interesting. Do you plan to continue the 'pared down' style of the first trilogy?

My first intuition about the three kidnapped Veela is that Harry & Gabrielle end up adopting them. But that would be a bit cliche.

Kokopelli replied:

Yes.

Oh, but I love breaking cliches.

Ken Warner posted a comment on Friday 18th August 2006 6:46am

Please please please - we would like some chocolate sauce - for the saucy French girl.

thanks - a very nice chapter

Kokopelli replied:

Remember that this story appears in the "no puddles" zone of FFA.

HermioneGreen posted a comment on Friday 18th August 2006 6:30am

A wonderful chapter. Keep up the good work.

'Mione