Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 16th July 2019 4:15am for Chapter the Fifth

Wow! Things are happening. I'm so glad that Remus found out how to have a painless transformation. That is a great help. Seeing Sirius was good. Seeing Narcissa was questional. I'm glad Sirius was doing as well as he was. I hope Remus can do something. The threat to Sirius is real and bad. I hope they do get him out in one piece. I feel bad for Alice. It is a good thing she quit the aurors. Neville needs her more. Remus suggestion of the Lodge is good but of course Alice is reluctant. Neville is not 2 yet. I look forward to more of this story. pms

mwinter posted a comment on Wednesday 12th July 2017 8:08pm for Chapter the Fifth

Interesting. Awaiting more.

huskerfan posted a comment on Monday 10th July 2017 10:49pm for Chapter the Fifth

Really enjoying the story so far, I like the characterization youve given Remus. Looking forward to seeing where the story goes from here!

John Wilburn posted a comment on Monday 10th July 2017 8:39am for Chapter the Fifth

You probably already know that "blitz" is German for lightening, but on the off chance you didn't I thought I would let you know. I'm really enjoying this story

Thanks

John

jilumasam posted a comment on Monday 10th July 2017 4:48am for Chapter the Fifth

I've really enjoyed this story so far...I should, at the very least, remember my password to this site so I can review in a much more timely manner. I look forward to seeing more of this!

Wolfric posted a comment on Monday 10th July 2017 1:42am for Chapter the Fifth

I am enjoying your fine story. Thanks for writing. W.

Aberforth's Avatar posted a comment on Saturday 8th July 2017 6:57pm for Chapter the Fifth

Thanks for sharing this. I am greatly enjoying the originality, especially your take on Remus Lupin.

Kairan1979 posted a comment on Saturday 8th July 2017 3:24pm for Chapter the Fifth

Interesting story so far.

Rowle can be a problem, especially considering Alice is now a civilian.

Lee Dickie posted a comment on Saturday 8th July 2017 3:03pm for Chapter the Fifth

An intriguimg approach to Alice moving on with her life.

bgoldnyxnet posted a comment on Saturday 8th July 2017 10:56am for Chapter the Fifth

This is fun so far. As you noted, pretty much AU to the whole series.

I'm glad you're writing again. For a long time there have been no updates at all -- I think it's been over a year. So seeing a new story is great!

robbspotter posted a comment on Saturday 8th July 2017 10:53am for Chapter the Fifth

wicked thansk, just love the way Moony plots, more when you can pretty please

gmanfatman posted a comment on Saturday 8th July 2017 10:41am for Chapter the Fifth

this is a nice update

rgshea96789 posted a comment on Saturday 8th July 2017 8:07am for Chapter the Fifth

This is a great story! I think Remus shold push a trail for Narcissa first. That way she can testify to Rowle and get him removed before he can harm Sirius.

Please keep writing.

Micky0077 posted a comment on Saturday 8th July 2017 1:56am for Chapter the Fifth

Still cruising along very nicely, still looking forward to each new chapter, great job. Loving the pacing, even if I do crave seeing Sirius out and Harry safe.

a_wanderer posted a comment on Friday 7th July 2017 10:51pm for Chapter the Fifth

I like the subtle construction of this world and Magical British culture.

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Friday 7th July 2017 9:02pm for Chapter the Fifth

Even the Light side of the Wizarding World is dark.

Kokopelli replied:

Uh,yeah,that's how things work.

dennisud posted a comment on Friday 7th July 2017 8:46pm for Chapter the Fifth

Will other lesser families be involved as in Weasley, Lovegood and maybe McGonagall?

Oh and Granger too, on the nonmagical side!

Kokopelli replied:

Minerva M. gets a few minutes of screen time in Chapter 6, but the other families, not so much.

Jason9 posted a comment on Friday 7th July 2017 8:15pm for Chapter the Fifth

It's awesome to be getting regular updates on a story I find myself enjoying quite a lot. Everything - the world, the characters, the set pieces - are all so believable in the realm of this universe that I was actually a little surprised by some of the things that aren't canon (if that makes any sense at all.) But I'm reminded that this isn't canon because I'm not tearing my hair out in frustration by characters doing completely bone headed things just to drive the narrative, or so completely out of character that I just have to put the story down and walk away. Seriously enjoying this story, and as unrealistic as it might be, I hope to see it continue for a long time. Thanks for your hard work and effort!

Kokopelli replied:

Chapter 6 is in the can, it's a big chapter.  After that, maybe three more chapters?  I've proven that I stink at estimating, so I'm not going to even try to make a forecast for this one.  I know where the story is going, and more or less how I'm going to get there, but every now and then a character will start doing things that I hadn't planned on.

JoeMcDermott posted a comment on Friday 7th July 2017 7:12pm for Chapter the Fifth

Please keep on with this. This is another one better written than jkr. (She can go on for as many as 300 pages with

no one learning anything which could be accomplished in a page or so.)

My thanks to Jeconais as well

WhiteElfElder posted a comment on Friday 7th July 2017 6:17pm for Chapter the Fifth

I have no doubt that Sirius would be killed and then Narcissa would be raped. Living at the Lodge with weres that can transform when they want would offer quite a bit of protection.

Kokopelli replied:

News flash,Narcissa has already been assaulted, she was just not very forthcoming about it.