Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 16th July 2019 12:26am for Chapter the First

This is really good. I like the fact that Remus has a job and he is respected by the Longbottoms and Remus also has proof to himself at least that Peter is not dead and Sirius is not guilty. I'm also glad that Arcturus trusts Remus. look forward to more of this story. Thanks for writing. pms

kyoshi posted a comment on Saturday 20th April 2019 8:45pm for Chapter the First

interesting story so far.

ILikeToRead posted a comment on Thursday 7th February 2019 10:49am for Chapter the First

Good first chapter and thanks for sharing!

ILikeToRead posted a comment on Friday 6th October 2017 1:35pm for Chapter the First

Great first chapter and interesting story concept. Thanks for sharing!

Wanderer posted a comment on Friday 14th July 2017 7:02pm for Chapter the First

Damn that was entertaining! :-) I managed to forget to check a certain email address, and look at the Treasure Trove that I have found, I can't wait for more.

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Friday 16th June 2017 11:04am for Chapter the First

Excellent departure from canon!

Michael10 posted a comment on Friday 26th May 2017 10:28pm for Chapter the First

great to see this. can't wait to see how it goes. was starting to think everyone here was dead or in jail

:D

dianaanne posted a comment on Friday 26th May 2017 8:31pm for Chapter the First

Awesome that you are back!

thekev posted a comment on Friday 26th May 2017 6:20pm for Chapter the First

Great story, I appreciate that you share your talents of story telling with us who can hardly write a review.

Amamama posted a comment on Thursday 25th May 2017 12:56pm for Chapter the First

One fast read through, just because it's wonderful to see new work from you. Then a slower read through, to savour all the details. A great start, I am eager to find out what happens next - and how will this influence Harry's childhood? Neville might also be different, as it seems he'll get to grow up with his parents? We'll see - you might change your mind, of course, but right now I'm rather hopeful for both boys. Thank you!

Kokopelli replied:

This isn't a "redo" story that will take Harry all through 7 years of Hogwarts and then an epilogue 18 years later.  That being said, things will probably pan out better for Harry, and Neville in this story.

traveller42 posted a comment on Thursday 25th May 2017 9:00am for Chapter the First

A nice story. I look forwards to the next part.

Kokopelli replied:

Thanks.

anonymous5 posted a comment on Thursday 18th May 2017 10:05am for Chapter the First

I'd almost forgotten how much I enjoyed your storytelling. Thanks for a fresh take on what could've been!

Kokopelli replied:

I'd forgotten how much work it was to tell a consistent, coherent story.  Thanks for your kind words.

gmanfatman posted a comment on Sunday 14th May 2017 11:09pm for Chapter the First

this is a nice chapter. looking forward to next chapter.

Frank Hacklander posted a comment on Saturday 13th May 2017 3:43pm for Chapter the First

Ugh...and here I was looking forward to a continuation of your story about Susan and Harry only for you to throw a curve with this delightful start. I agree with your comments regarding Remus in canon. But this is great and one can already imagine the ripples from the splash you've made. I am looking forward to seeing more of this.

Kokopelli replied:

I was looking forward to the Harry/Susan story, but the wheels fell off that story's wagon, and I've not yet figured out how to fix it.  So until that repair is made, you have this story.

Lon Huey posted a comment on Saturday 13th May 2017 2:52pm for Chapter the First

Well, all right. Glad to see you're still writing. As with every other item you've been involved with, I'm looking forward to how this unfolds. Thank you.

Kokopelli replied:

Thanks.

Lee Dickie posted a comment on Saturday 13th May 2017 11:40am for Chapter the First

Cracking good set-up, well written and entertaining.

Kokopelli replied:

Thanks for your kind words.

jdekke posted a comment on Friday 12th May 2017 5:43pm for Chapter the First

Welcome back and good start. Hope to see more soon.

By the way the water between England and Ireland is called The Irish Sea and not the Atlantic.

Kokopelli replied:

You are, of course, right, but in the USA the geographically challenged are lucky if they know that there is an Atlantic and a Pacific, much less being able to name the lesser seas.