Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 16th July 2019 3:30am for Chapter the Fourth

Remus has made contact with Harry and found him in terrible circumstances. I'm glad that Remus at least gave Harry some cheese to eat. The auror department has not been treating the Longbottom aurors well. Now Frank is dead. That is terrible. The fact that Bellatrix killed him is not unexpected. Julia did well and she also showed Remus that she also has feelings for Remus. Of course Remus is reluctant to have a relationship. So many things going on at once. I look forward to more of this story. pms

ILikeToRead posted a comment on Friday 6th October 2017 6:44pm for Chapter the Fourth

Good chapter with a terrible ending. I'm sure that Harry is rather confused why Moony showed up and then left him again. Thanks for sharing!

Wanderer posted a comment on Sunday 23rd July 2017 11:47pm for Chapter the Fourth

Damn. I was hoping...

Love the A/N, and the story, thanks for writing ;)

ThadiusZho posted a comment on Sunday 2nd July 2017 6:15pm for Chapter the Fourth

As usual, compeling story, good plot twists. You're in great shape, Kokopelli. Keep up the good work

Lee Dickie posted a comment on Sunday 2nd July 2017 10:38am for Chapter the Fourth

Great writing with an interesting collection of scenes. I was sorry to see Frank go.

Well done and thank you.

Wolfric posted a comment on Saturday 1st July 2017 7:35pm for Chapter the Fourth

Fine chapter. Thanks for writing. W.

a_wanderer posted a comment on Friday 30th June 2017 8:15pm for Chapter the Fourth

Okay I'm hooked.

Kokopelli replied:

heh heh heh...

pianomouse10 posted a comment on Friday 30th June 2017 5:18pm for Chapter the Fourth

I am really enjoying your story, I love that you are expanding on Remus' character. Thank you for sharing this.

robbspotter posted a comment on Friday 30th June 2017 3:30pm for Chapter the Fourth

love it thanks, though how moony left harry there i do not know, and at least neville will have one whole parent. More when you can pretty please

Kokopelli replied:

Chapter 5 will probably come out next Thursday.

amulder posted a comment on Friday 30th June 2017 3:22pm for Chapter the Fourth

Wow, John, you are going really off the beaten path with this one! Well done.

Kokopelli replied:

As I said in the beginning, this is pretty much AU to everything, but I am setting the stage for a better world for Harry to grow up in - if everything works out.

gmanfatman posted a comment on Friday 30th June 2017 1:38pm for Chapter the Fourth

it is nice that Remus knows where Harry is.

Kairan1979 posted a comment on Friday 30th June 2017 12:20pm for Chapter the Fourth

With Frank dead, Harry's situation is even more problematic than before. Remus can't do much without allies.

Kokopelli replied:

A) Remus is making allies as he goes along and B) he's already got a few.

sh777 posted a comment on Friday 30th June 2017 7:22am for Chapter the Fourth

Thanks for the excellent update. At least Neville will keep one of his parents.

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Friday 30th June 2017 3:53am for Chapter the Fourth

Frank dying was surprising, I expected more with him and Remus. Why hasn't Remus simply called the cops and dropped an anon tip so they can discover Harry in the closet while the Dursleys are out?

Kokopelli replied:

Because the Dark Lord Dumbledore is still standing by the levers of power.  Never strike at a snake unless you intend to kill it.  There is a plan for extracting Harry.

Antosha posted a comment on Thursday 29th June 2017 10:18pm for Chapter the Fourth

:-(

All lovely, and all interesting... but sad.

Kokopelli replied:

Thanks - and yes, it is sad.

bigd95822 posted a comment on Thursday 29th June 2017 9:55pm for Chapter the Fourth

Really well-written chapter, and yet very distressing. Frank and Alice never seem to catch a break. Without Frank, Harry's extraction and upbringing are again in doubt.Seems Frank forgot the first rule of law enforcement. make it home after your shift.

Rather pissed about Remus leaving Harry there. A little cash and some nice words would have Harry out of there lickity spit.

looking forward to another exciting installment.

Kokopelli replied:

Yeah, Frank kind of gets the short straw here, but there's a reason for it.  Be patient with the Harry situation.

JoeMcDermott posted a comment on Thursday 29th June 2017 9:24pm for Chapter the Fourth

Nicely done so far; looks like a different situation for Neville -- he might have more confidence.

Kokopelli replied:

Neville actually makes an appearance soon.

Jmcmutt posted a comment on Thursday 29th June 2017 8:49pm for Chapter the Fourth

This is a vey intriguing story. Hope you update soon

WhiteElfElder posted a comment on Thursday 29th June 2017 7:07pm for Chapter the Fourth

Well dang, you just had to kill Frank off which makes getting custody of Harry that much more difficult. I do hope things go down that Narcissa does not get the aid of either Malfoy nor Black money to get out of the situation she is in. Bella being on the loose is bad, very bad.

Kokopelli replied:

Well, you won't see Narcissa's contribution until later in Chapter 6.  Alice is still Harry's godmother - does anyone really think that Sirius Black has any business raising a two year old toddler?

stormmaster posted a comment on Thursday 29th June 2017 4:16pm for Chapter the Fourth

I feel like there should be some obligatory dun dun duns here. Interesting twists to the story. Multiple character deaths, which should have many later ramifications. I am curious as to where the Julia bit is going. It feels very slice of life right, juxtaposed with the other scenes. Well written. I look forward to reading the fallout in the coming chapters.

Kokopelli replied:

Well, I'll start giving "character death" warnings when JKR does.  I have plans for Alice, and Frank's a little too pureblood for my tastes, although he wasn't as much of a jerk as James Potter.  As to the other casualties - this is exercising my awesome power as a fan fic writer. Whose death would make the HP universe a better place?  Lucius and Cornelius went to the top of that list, with Barty Crouch a close second.