Aberforth's Avatar posted a comment on Thursday 20th July 2017 8:37am for Chapter the Seventh
Whoa. Just Whoa. Nicely done; despite the hint at the beginning, I was completely taken in by where the story seemed to be going. Many thanks for sharing this with us.
Whoa. Just Whoa. Nicely done; despite the hint at the beginning, I was completely taken in by where the story seemed to be going.
Many thanks for sharing this with us.
Kokopelli replied:
The hand is quicker than the eye...then the hand is used to distract from what's really going on.
Aberforth's Avatar posted a comment on Thursday 20th July 2017 8:37am for Chapter the Seventh
Kokopelli replied: