starhanyou posted a comment on Sunday 28th May 2017 12:27am

Really enjoying this!

Wolfric posted a comment on Saturday 27th May 2017 2:01am

I am enjoying your fine story. I didn't get an email for the first chapter, so this one kind of surprized me but pleasently. Thanks for writing. W.

Michael10 posted a comment on Friday 26th May 2017 10:31pm

considered a good cow? can't wait to see what's next.

thank you for sharing and keep up the good work

Michael10 posted a comment on Friday 26th May 2017 10:28pm

great to see this. can't wait to see how it goes. was starting to think everyone here was dead or in jail

:D

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Friday 26th May 2017 10:06pm

Now this is a definitely different take on things and I reckon the way matters are progressing that a lot of Dumbledore's plans are going to be quietly upended before Harry ever arrives at Hogwarts. This is a fun ride and I'm quite enjoying it.

dianaanne posted a comment on Friday 26th May 2017 8:32pm

This is a unique twist to Remus' story. I like it!

dianaanne posted a comment on Friday 26th May 2017 8:31pm

Awesome that you are back!

WhiteElfElder posted a comment on Friday 26th May 2017 7:58pm

Well, part of being a Steward is to help the Head, so Remus investigating what is going on with Sirius is par. I hope that he can at least get Harry free and out of Albus' clutches...and then maybe out of Britain.

thekev posted a comment on Friday 26th May 2017 6:20pm

Great story, I appreciate that you share your talents of story telling with us who can hardly write a review.

Antosha posted a comment on Friday 26th May 2017 5:32pm

Gumshoe Moony. Nice!

As always, a pleasure to read one of your tales. And I love how the one small change — Sirius hiring Remus — has led to a ripple of changes across the story. I look forward to seeing where you lead us!

Jason9 posted a comment on Friday 26th May 2017 4:58pm

As usual, I enjoy your versions of the HP universe characters quite a bit more than the originals. Great to read another of your stories, and definitely enjoying this one so far. It's the smallest things that leave me eagerly anticipating the next chapter. Thanks for writing and publishing!

Micky0077 posted a comment on Friday 26th May 2017 8:57am

So far, a very interesting developing of the story. Looking forward to seeing how this continues.

Frank Hacklander posted a comment on Thursday 25th May 2017 3:54pm

And the plot thickens. You've got me hooked.

Lee Dickie posted a comment on Thursday 25th May 2017 3:25pm

A well written development of the story with a particulary insightful take on what hapens in the days after Tom's fall.

aresofrecluce posted a comment on Thursday 25th May 2017 3:13pm

Hey Kokopelli,

Good to see you posting again. I've really enjoyed these two chapters so far.

Like you, I was also disappointed with the canon (and most fanfiction) Remus. I also tend not to go looking for "before Harry's at hogwarts stories".

This story brought me in immediately. I am excited to see where this competent Remus (and alive for now Longbottoms) goes.

Eagerly anticipating,

AresOfRecluce

Amamama posted a comment on Thursday 25th May 2017 12:56pm

One fast read through, just because it's wonderful to see new work from you. Then a slower read through, to savour all the details. A great start, I am eager to find out what happens next - and how will this influence Harry's childhood? Neville might also be different, as it seems he'll get to grow up with his parents? We'll see - you might change your mind, of course, but right now I'm rather hopeful for both boys. Thank you!

Kokopelli replied:

This isn't a "redo" story that will take Harry all through 7 years of Hogwarts and then an epilogue 18 years later.  That being said, things will probably pan out better for Harry, and Neville in this story.

traveller42 posted a comment on Thursday 25th May 2017 9:00am

A nice story. I look forwards to the next part.

Kokopelli replied:

Thanks.

anonymous5 posted a comment on Thursday 18th May 2017 10:05am

I'd almost forgotten how much I enjoyed your storytelling. Thanks for a fresh take on what could've been!

Kokopelli replied:

I'd forgotten how much work it was to tell a consistent, coherent story.  Thanks for your kind words.

gmanfatman posted a comment on Sunday 14th May 2017 11:09pm

this is a nice chapter. looking forward to next chapter.

Frank Hacklander posted a comment on Saturday 13th May 2017 3:43pm

Ugh...and here I was looking forward to a continuation of your story about Susan and Harry only for you to throw a curve with this delightful start. I agree with your comments regarding Remus in canon. But this is great and one can already imagine the ripples from the splash you've made. I am looking forward to seeing more of this.

Kokopelli replied:

I was looking forward to the Harry/Susan story, but the wheels fell off that story's wagon, and I've not yet figured out how to fix it.  So until that repair is made, you have this story.