RubinCompServ posted a comment on Thursday 11th June 2020 12:43pm for The Exchange - Act One, Scene Three

I'm really enjoying this story, and thrilled that you're writing more! I admit, I was caught off guard when you brought Lily to the past - I was expecting one of the typical (almost cliched) "Dumbledore is evil, let's go help Harry defeat him AND Voldemort" stories, and now it's going to be a Harry Potter story without Harry Potter; brilliant! I'm stuck in a Catch-22 now: I don't want to have to wait for the next chapter, but waiting for you to finish the story means I don't get to read the story for a while! There is a solution, however: be a pal and write quickly? Thanks :)

Lon Huey posted a comment on Thursday 4th June 2020 8:14pm for The Exchange - Act One, Scene Three

Okay, I'm drawn in. Never been a fan of time travle fics, but you have me hooked. Is this it,or will you continue with it. Either way, good to read some new stuff.

Kairan1979 posted a comment on Thursday 4th June 2020 2:02pm for The Exchange - Act One, Scene Three

I wonder if Lily will be able to influence the Blacks, of her involvement will change things for worse.

ILikeToRead posted a comment on Wednesday 3rd June 2020 10:49pm for The Exchange - Act One, Scene Three

I really liked this chapter with the story of her life and death as well as Luna pulling her soul out. Thanks for sharing!

Mistress of Potions posted a comment on Wednesday 3rd June 2020 6:45pm for The Exchange - Act One, Scene Three

Luna's honesty and pragmatism are shocking to those who are used to the "polite fiction" of regular social interactions, but I find them refreshing. Also, she makes everything seem quite logical as ahe presents it. It's only later that you feel as if she took you on a magical mystery tour.

rgshea96789 posted a comment on Wednesday 3rd June 2020 3:27pm for The Exchange - Act One, Scene Three

So Lily is now two(?) generations ahead (early) and will be able to influence the Blacks? Things are looking interesting. Especially with Lily's potions knowledge. Thanks for writing.

Kokopelli replied:

Lily is in the early 1920's - her mission to to deal with Voldemort and Dumbledore.

The Seeker posted a comment on Wednesday 3rd June 2020 1:36pm for The Exchange - Act One, Scene Three

Really like how you're showing Luna. Somehow you've kept her identifying qualities, while making her a bit different. The storyline definitely fits her personality. Lily is a very nice backboard for Luna to bounce her observations and comments off of. It will be fun to see what Lily's like while inhabiting Lycoris' body and mind.

Kokopelli replied:

Luna is really, really hard to write well.   I've seen a lot of badly done Luna in fan fic.    

BJH posted a comment on Wednesday 3rd June 2020 11:37am for The Exchange - Act One, Scene Three

So Lily is no Licorice (pardon the sweet pun) but what tab does Luna have to settle?

Will we see more of Lycoris? I've grown a bit fond of her with just those few lines. She reminds me a bit of Harry with the feelings of "who would want MY life?"

And you've successed in confusing me further, I hope you're proud of yourself.

BJH

Kokopelli replied:

Why the tab at the tavern in the prior scene, of course.

We won't see much of Lycoris, but Lily will be mining her memories.