James Kennedy posted a comment on Thursday 28th May 2020 11:37pm for The Exchange - Act One, Scene Two

I know The Exchange is a Vault story but I'm hoping it gets completed.

I like it-- it's interesting-- and I like the interaction between Lily & Luna.

Thank you.

Kairan1979 posted a comment on Thursday 28th May 2020 1:29pm for The Exchange - Act One, Scene Two

As always, Luna never fails to get my attention.

I hope to see more character development for Lily in the next chapter.

Kokopelli replied:

Chapter after next.

lwj2 posted a comment on Tuesday 26th May 2020 10:43pm for The Exchange - Act One, Scene Two

Intriguing, thanks for sharing it.

mwinter posted a comment on Tuesday 26th May 2020 8:40pm for The Exchange - Act One, Scene Two

Once again you've grabed my attention withyour story telling. It's quite interesting to read your Luna.

BJH posted a comment on Tuesday 26th May 2020 3:20pm for The Exchange - Act One, Scene Two

I have to say, every time I think I know where you are going with this story, Luna goes and does something quite Luna-ish and takes me in a totally different direction. Now, instead of Lily being someone who can take harry from Petunia, she's far enough in the past to do something about Voldemort directly and make the entire series obsolete, or maybe just change Sirius enough to save Harry, or maybe do something Luna-ish again and I haven't the foggiest of where it going.

It's just so refreshing to not be able to predict where it will go.

Thanks for the gift.

BJH

Kokopelli replied:

This story is so AU that by the time we get to the third or fourth chapter, you won't be able to see the original timeline, although Luna can go back and forth.

ILikeToRead posted a comment on Tuesday 26th May 2020 3:16pm for The Exchange - Act One, Scene Two

Interesting chapter and thanks for sharing!

Kokopelli replied:

You're most welcome.

Mistress of Potions posted a comment on Tuesday 26th May 2020 12:59pm for The Exchange - Act One, Scene Two

I like Luna, she has a very refreshing, albeit sometimes confusing, point of view.

Kokopelli replied:

Me too.

The Seeker posted a comment on Tuesday 26th May 2020 12:10pm for The Exchange - Act One, Scene Two

Very atmospheric feeling to the chapter. Luna was Luna, so it was interesting to see Lily mostly recessive. Especially puzzling is that they 'might be a bit late' for the transfer. Will we see another chapter soon? Regardless, thanks for this.

Kokopelli replied:

No promises as to timing.

rgshea96789 posted a comment on Tuesday 26th May 2020 10:40am for The Exchange - Act One, Scene Two

Luna usually has the best timing. Oh, well. I guess getting murdered can throw anybody off. Thanks for writing.

Kokopelli replied:

Luna's still learning how these things work. "It's not like this job came with an illustrated manual," she said once.

amulder posted a comment on Tuesday 26th May 2020 7:27am for The Exchange - Act One, Scene Two

I've read so much fanfic that I don't even know anymore if Luna saying "oh, pooh" is fanon or canon. I still find it charming.

Interesting waystation scene.

Couple of interesting comments though from Luna on Harry... The prologue did not give any hints as to what Harry might have done as MoD, but now... Luna said Harry "always" arrives in Kings Cross. Is this story going to be all Lily, or will we have more snippets from Harry's adventures as an adult MoD ??

thanks

Kokopelli replied:

Hello, Art.   No, Harry's part of this story is over, the main story arc is Lily going back to the 1920's to take care of Riddle and Dumbldore.   In this story's background, Harry has gone back to the train station two or three times since the episode we saw in Deathly Hallows.