By kokopelli
Reviews
Eric2 posted a comment on Thursday 30th November 2006 3:34am
Nice, low-keyed, and very sweet.
HermioneGreen posted a comment on Thursday 30th November 2006 2:32am
what a wonderful scene.
Thanks for sharing
'Mione
seeker77 posted a comment on Thursday 30th November 2006 2:22am
Sounds like it could be a workable story. Still, TLOS and SFSY are what hooked me. You have a very creative writing style (my sons are reading your work now, so I dont get the time to review everything) keep up the great work
Kokopelli replied:
My son reads and re-reads TLOS. He's a fan.
The Resident posted a comment on Wednesday 29th November 2006 9:35pm
Another cute chapter, now if you could only get a story for it to go to... Anyway, I enjoy these snippets. Hopefully it will inspire you or someone else to write the story. I always look forward to the next one.
Kokopelli replied:
Well, as the question of the story that follows thereafter, that's JKR's job.
But I am returning to the story that follows Maskirova.
Amamama posted a comment on Wednesday 29th November 2006 7:59pm
Finally Harry gets some sense knocked into his scull. Wonder if JKR will do it like this? She should, at least something similar. The Weasleys all are in mortal peril, no matter how close their relationship to Harry is. They're just too honest, brave and caring to please The Bigot as anything but victims of his whims. Might as well go full out and fill their - and Harry's - life with love. Lovely, enticing entrée - I guess there will be more coming?
Cheers!
Berte
Kokopelli replied:
More? Not on this story, but I am returning to Along the Way...
Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Wednesday 29th November 2006 4:39pm
*chuckle* A nice, enjoyable little vignette there.
Thanks.
DJ posted a comment on Wednesday 29th November 2006 1:41pm
You should keep this one going its grate. If you don't can you at least tell me if he gets his magic back?
jilumasam posted a comment on Wednesday 29th November 2006 1:21pm
Nice! I love how this story just dumps us right in the middle. Leaving us to use our imaginations to create a beginning and an end.
brad posted a comment on Wednesday 29th November 2006 12:52pm
Reading this again; enjoying it again. Glad you've put things like this up!
David posted a comment on Wednesday 29th November 2006 12:10pm
Too bad JKR's unlikely to handle it this way... this is an intriguing opener, with great potential :)
KateHC posted a comment on Wednesday 29th November 2006 12:07pm
That Ginny is no slouch in any way. Harry might as well give up.
DJ posted a comment on Wednesday 29th November 2006 11:40am
Nice follow up.
RhymesWithOrange posted a comment on Wednesday 29th November 2006 11:32am
Once again you've managed to put together the smallest glimpse of a fic that I'd really love to see the rest of. Excellent work.
Chris1 posted a comment on Wednesday 29th November 2006 10:15am
Really nice little ficlet here :)
Thanks for sharing
Chris
Jim_xinu posted a comment on Wednesday 29th November 2006 9:45am
Nice little scene. Thanks for sharing it with us.
Particle_Accelerator posted a comment on Saturday 13th May 2006 5:04am
This is a very intersting story - is this being posted in its entirity elsewhere? Is this all that is written for it? I love the H-Hr dynamic that is developing. Keep up the good work!
Meteoricshipyards posted a comment on Friday 31st March 2006 7:23am
That's nice.
Rotten about Meggan, though--She loves Harry, Harry doesn't love her back, but does care for her. And Hermione loves Harry, too. Quite the problem, I'd be interested in how it turns out; however, I expect that either Meggan gets the short end of the stick, or ends up dead. (Seems to happen in a lot of fan fiction - author puts Harry with someone else for a while, but then kills off the "wrong woman" to get Harry with the Right one.)
Thanks for writing, hope it gets finished some day.
Kokopelli replied:
The character dies when they're wearing a red shirt - Meggan prefers white or green, depending upon whether she's wearing any underwear or not. I don't recall whether or not we killed her off - she did have a role to play later in the story - if I recall correctly, Harry leaves her the DIY Ironmonger store. I did enjoy writing this tale, but Mr. Intel didn't have the time to keep working on it - perhaps another day.
Jack B Nimble posted a comment on Thursday 23rd March 2006 1:08am
Oh, man... You have such a nice touch, and these chapters are special. I just hate that there isn't more to this.
Patches posted a comment on Wednesday 22nd March 2006 8:25pm
I like it. I can see Harry and Hermione working this out. Thanks for sharing your vault. This could be a good au.
pms
Crys posted a comment on Thursday 30th November 2006 4:38am
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