TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Friday 29th December 2006 10:26am for Ride and remember

Very good chapter.

gunny

noylj posted a comment on Monday 25th September 2006 5:29pm for Ride and remember

I can not believe that Harry closed the door on Hermione like that. If I got a letter like that, my response (unless I really understood what a nosey, pushy, nagging, know-it-all Hermione is) would be to respond "No, I don't think I could be that lucky. I think she has her eyes set on another Griffindor in our year." I still do not know what canon!Hermione sees in Ron. I could see Tonks, Ginny, and Hermione all having a go at Harry. Other girls, maybe, but Harry does not go out of his way to meet or talk to anyone, much less other girls.

Kokopelli replied:

If I were Harry, I'd be all over Hermione in a heartbeat, but I'm not.

Per canon, Harry's closest friends are Ron, followed by Hermione.  

Per canon everyone can see that Ron fancies Hermione.  

If Harry were to snatch Hermione from under Ron's nose, we could expect that action to totally rupture Harry's friendship with Ron - which was much worse than the estrangement he had from Ron during GoF.

I don't write harem fics - if you're looking for those, check out Kinsfire.

Per canon, Hermione is Harry's friend - I've had lots of girls who were my friends, who I thought to be reasonably attractive, but I didn't want to jump their bones or pledge my troth to them.

As always, your mileage may vary.

J

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Wednesday 31st May 2006 1:19am for Ride and remember

Yes, it had been a very fine day, and you wrote it in a very fine manner.

Writing battles is one thing, writing life is another.

Well done.

Aberbadger posted a comment on Tuesday 16th May 2006 7:14am for Ride and remember

Just another small Britpick Point...
We call ATMs Cashpoints. In fact, if you have a card for that specific purpose, rather than paying for stuff as well, then they will have a little strip accross the side you put in first, that says "Cashpoint" on it....

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Tuesday 9th May 2006 2:43pm for Ride and remember

Outstanding.

gunny

Wooster posted a comment on Thursday 22nd December 2005 12:58pm for Ride and remember

Oh...both those letters were so sweet. From a loving mom and sister to an only-child orphan. Great. I liked Moey a lot too. Great character, fun and friendly. She sounds like what I'd expect a friend of Tonks to be.

Patches posted a comment on Sunday 20th November 2005 11:29pm for Ride and remember

Great chapter. I really like Moey. A great new character. Thanks for this story. It is late and I have to go to bed. Keep writing. I'll be reading more soon.
Thanks,Patches.

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Sunday 23rd October 2005 2:31am for Ride and remember

Excellent scene with Harry catching the auror,
but the two letters at the end of the story were what made the chapter.