Wooster posted a comment on Monday 26th December 2005 12:59pm for The End of August

fantastic. incredible. i have to clean. crud. i was going to start stories from sixth year and ran out of time. *grumbles irritatedly*

oh well, i'll just have to settle with starting after my chores...or tomorrow. whichever comes first. hopefully the first...cause if i'm not done with my chores tonight when i had all day to do them my mom will do something similar to what ginny did to draco...which was brilliant by the way. i'm assuming the 'bogey' things were the result of a bat bogey hex?

Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd November 2005 8:02pm for The End of August

I really like this story. Of course I'm interested in the sequel. I enjoy your delivery. It is really believable. Cho on the train was a nice touch.
Thank you for writing. Now i'm going to look for the sequel. I finally got smart and I look at the stories in the order they were written.
that way I can enjoy the unfolding of the whole story.

Thanks again.

Jamey posted a comment on Friday 18th November 2005 4:01pm for The End of August

Awesome story, and I prefer the formatting here much better than on phoenixsong.net. Are you going to be posting "Stories from Sixth Year" here at some point?

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Sunday 23rd October 2005 10:41pm for The End of August

Excellent work, as always. Harry may not be an animagus, but I have the feeling that changing into a dragon is a diferent brand of magic alltogether anyway.

Machiavelli Jr posted a comment on Friday 7th October 2005 7:35am for The End of August

Wow. In every possible way, this is fantastic. I think I have another to add to my tiny list [two dozen original and now six fanfic] of read-at-once, top priority authors. The one and only argument I have with you is that the Weasleys occasionally go really archaic in their speech. Fred and George's 'simply corking to see you' is taking the piss; even Percy wouldn't say that. 'Cracking' is much more Weasley and conveys the same sense and Englishness. You don't desperately need a brit-picker but it annoys the English, even though you are making an effort and doing better than 99%. You're now going to inform me you're actually British, aren't you?

BJH posted a comment on Thursday 6th October 2005 12:27pm for The End of August

Interesting, on the same site I find stories where Harry has every type of sex imaginable with as any partners as possible, of both sexes, and another where Harry and Ginny are deeply in love and committed to each other but don't even kiss.

And both types of stories are delightful to read.

I have to admit that I will be sorry to say good-bye to Jasmine, she was a fun and compelling character. Not to mention riding a nice bike.

This was an excellent story, John, and I appreciate your taking the efforts to share it with us.

BJH