Patches posted a comment on Monday 21st November 2005 10:20am

I can see why Harry gets confused. He doesn't know what love is. He only knows he feels things that he hasn't felt before. Jasmine is beautiful but she is not the one. The visions portray a future that isn't clear to any but a hopeful reader! I still see Harrry and Ginny being together for the rest of their lives.
Keep on I am enjoying this.

Patches posted a comment on Monday 21st November 2005 9:56am

I love dragons. This was an excellent chapter that included magical creatures in Harry's life. After the Tri-Wizard Tournament dragons have been an important factor in Harry's life. I'm so glad you found a way to include them. Also the spider from the cupboard in Harry's childhood, Fawkes in Harry's 2nd year and 4th years and the bat with the power to reaach out and sense danger approaching. Really great imagery. It is sad to think Abelard is not going to live long. However even long lived wizards will not live forever. A lesson in life. Thanks for writing.

Patches posted a comment on Monday 21st November 2005 8:33am

Great. I really am glad Harry got to pass on Quidditch Captain. Ron is a better choice. It also gives Ron a boost. Harry needs to use his special talents to everyone's bennefit. I really like Abelard and how he and Harry are proceeding. I think the Tonks/Remus story is right on. Thanks for writing.

Patches posted a comment on Monday 21st November 2005 6:58am

Thanks for the explanation about "estates" and "neighborhoods". Sometimes I see idioms used and I wonder exactly what they mean. Most of the time I can figure them out. At least I hope I can. I'm glad Harry finally got the message that Ginny has not been dating Dean. That is a load off my mind. I like the way you let Harry know without making Ginny look too bad. Maybe now things can progress. Thanks for writing.

Patches posted a comment on Monday 21st November 2005 6:14am

Great chapter. I love it when authors create characters that remind me of Dumbledore. Of course Abelard sounds like Albus brother. Time will tell. I like the fact that Abelard "would do anything for Lily, even after she is gone". It makes a nice connection for Harry to his mother. That, and Remus connection helps too!
Thanks for writing. I cannot write a story but I am an avid consumer of other peoples talents.
You are now on my favorites list. Thanks again.

Patches posted a comment on Monday 21st November 2005 5:29am

Great! Ginny and Harry just might have a chance! Good. I'm a sucker for a good love story. I really like the fact that these 2 girls talk to their mothers. It is a nice change to the way some people are. Harry's letter was great. I thank Laurel for pointing him in the right direction.
Thanks for another great chapter.

Patches posted a comment on Monday 21st November 2005 5:28am

Great! Ginny and Harry just might have a chance! Good. I'm a sucker for a good love story. I really like the fact that these 2 girls talk to their mothers. It is a nice change to the way some people are. Harry's letter was great. I thank Laurel for pointing him in the

Patches posted a comment on Monday 21st November 2005 4:49am

A great chapter. I really like Hermione talking so frankly with her mother. That is refreshing. I thought it was great that Remus and Harry got to spend his transformation together. That is cool. I'm glad that Harry is starting to deal with Sirius death. That is a biggie. I really like the way you are handling this. I look forward to reading the "rest of the story"!

Patches posted a comment on Monday 21st November 2005 4:11am

Like an echo of Harry's mind. Strange. Thought provoking. Will it have an impact on the future? I guess we will find out!

Patches posted a comment on Sunday 20th November 2005 11:29pm

Great chapter. I really like Moey. A great new character. Thanks for this story. It is late and I have to go to bed. Keep writing. I'll be reading more soon.
Thanks,Patches.

Patches posted a comment on Sunday 20th November 2005 10:58pm

Wow! This is great. I really like Harry. I am always impressed that most writers, like yourself, see Harry as a strong thoughtful person that looks at the whole picture when he can. This is an excellent job. Tonks is so cool. She is wonderful. Sexy, irreverant, smart and honest! Great.
Thanks, so much for writing.

Patches posted a comment on Sunday 20th November 2005 10:24pm

I like this story. I think it is great that Ginny, Hermione and Tonks are working with Harry and keeping his spirits up. It is cool that Tonks pointed out that Ginny was the one that come up with the passboxes. Great immagination to come up with that concept. I am so impressed with all the fan fiction writers and the things they come up with.
Full marks!
Thanks for writing. I appreciate it!

Jamey posted a comment on Friday 18th November 2005 4:01pm

Awesome story, and I prefer the formatting here much better than on phoenixsong.net. Are you going to be posting "Stories from Sixth Year" here at some point?

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Sunday 23rd October 2005 10:41pm

Excellent work, as always. Harry may not be an animagus, but I have the feeling that changing into a dragon is a diferent brand of magic alltogether anyway.

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Sunday 23rd October 2005 8:21am

Harry began humming a tune while zipping up the robes, stopping himself when he realized the tune was Jasmine’s impromptu song "I get to measure Harry again."

LOL! She is a great character.

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Sunday 23rd October 2005 5:40am

Loved the ending. The author's note wasn't half bad either. I was curious.

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Sunday 23rd October 2005 5:28am

Great chapter. Having magical dragons rather then just winged animals is one of my favorite
things.

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Sunday 23rd October 2005 4:30am

"It was brilliant, Harry, it was brilliant."

That about cover my opinion of this chapter.

Excellent work.

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Sunday 23rd October 2005 3:22am

Why couldn't Hermoine just tell Harry that Ginny was single and claimed to be dating Sean to get her older brother off her back?

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Sunday 23rd October 2005 2:31am

Excellent scene with Harry catching the auror,
but the two letters at the end of the story were what made the chapter.