Jack posted a comment on Monday 10th October 2005 10:52pm

I think I already reviewed this on PS.net, but I am enjoying reading it again. I look forward to the rest, and to continuing on with the follow-up stories.

I really like the simple formatting on this site, as it translates very well to my handheld where I do much of my reading. Your use of Blockquote is a nice touch for making the letters stand out. It does not work as well, however, when Blockquote is used for several paragraphs in between letters, as happened here. I'm guessing, as you just started here, that maybe some of the formatting tools aren't quite polished yet?

Anyway, thanks again for all the hard work, and thanks for sharing the results!

Machiavelli Jr posted a comment on Friday 7th October 2005 7:35am

Wow. In every possible way, this is fantastic. I think I have another to add to my tiny list [two dozen original and now six fanfic] of read-at-once, top priority authors. The one and only argument I have with you is that the Weasleys occasionally go really archaic in their speech. Fred and George's 'simply corking to see you' is taking the piss; even Percy wouldn't say that. 'Cracking' is much more Weasley and conveys the same sense and Englishness. You don't desperately need a brit-picker but it annoys the English, even though you are making an effort and doing better than 99%. You're now going to inform me you're actually British, aren't you?

BJH posted a comment on Thursday 6th October 2005 12:27pm

Interesting, on the same site I find stories where Harry has every type of sex imaginable with as any partners as possible, of both sexes, and another where Harry and Ginny are deeply in love and committed to each other but don't even kiss.

And both types of stories are delightful to read.

I have to admit that I will be sorry to say good-bye to Jasmine, she was a fun and compelling character. Not to mention riding a nice bike.

This was an excellent story, John, and I appreciate your taking the efforts to share it with us.

BJH

Tanydwr posted a comment on Wednesday 5th October 2005 8:47am

*Sheepish grin*
Well, my reviews seem a little redundant now. Why you had to change it in the middle of while I was reading... Especially as you've added a boatload more chapters and I *should* be in bed. I'll read one more. Then finish up tomorrow. It also seems like I'm the first/only reviewer. Yay for me! I have the Author's Index with all seven of you bookmarked.
Lol, Tanydwr