Wolfric posted a comment on Saturday 9th June 2007 3:26am

Interesting, I've been following a story where Harry is host to his father's conciousness but being host to his mother's adds the gender issue to the mix. I like it. Please continue and thanks for writing. W.

DrT posted a comment on Saturday 9th June 2007 12:24am

Interesting concept. I look forward to seeing what you do with it.

"T"

Kay posted a comment on Friday 8th June 2007 11:29pm

interesting take on the 'harry is a horcrux' plot. for some reason i couldn't stop laughing at the 'expecting the easter bunny line'- something about the pose that harry/lily struck, i dunno. thanks for writing this. it was highly enjoyable.

Tanydwr posted a comment on Friday 8th June 2007 11:17pm

My favourite line:

'Resistance is futile. You will reproduce."

Harry's had the chance to see enough Star Trek to misquote the Borg? Mind you, the Dursleys would rather Dudley watched science fiction than anything to do with magic, I guess...

Very interesting. So Lily effectively made Harry her own horcrux? In order to protect him? Interesting.

Keep up the good work, I look forward to more.

Lol, Tanydwr

AutumnHeart posted a comment on Friday 8th June 2007 9:20pm

Ooh - interesting.

I look forward to seeing where this goes. And I'm totally on your side in the cruxes/cruces debate :)

CootiePatootie posted a comment on Friday 8th June 2007 7:50pm

clever, clever. This is great. I am really looking forward to more of this very unique story line. I love the Remus/Lily interaction. My only nitpick is why haven't we seen her before??

ta,

Cassie

KC posted a comment on Friday 8th June 2007 1:34pm

Deathly amusing =)

I love the nickname "RJ" for Lupin. Very creative.

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Friday 8th June 2007 1:07pm

*snicker* *guffaw* Oh, now that's an original take on his protection. If this keeps up, the final confrontation with Tom could prove more than a little interesting. I have to feel sorry for Harry, though, sharing a body with his mother is going to feel more than passing strange.

uthamm posted a comment on Friday 8th June 2007 12:29pm

"resistance is futile, you will reproduce" Good thing I wasn't drinking anything at the time!

Do we get to see Harry channeling Lilly revenge on the Dursley's?

Interesting concept. Looking forward to more (as I do all your stories). Will we get information on why life threatening situations now, versus all the others? Thanks so much for sharing your talents with us (BTW - I put my tomatoes in last week).

Aelfwine posted a comment on Friday 8th June 2007 11:49am

Interesting story; quite a different twist on the "Lily's not quite dead, actually" theme that's been showing up of late.

And thank you so very much for using the correct plural! I've been wishing sometime now for a nice crusty old Latin master (or mistress) to deal JKR a good (figurative) skelp with a copy of Wheelock's . And I've long known Hermione would get it right. ;-)

josh_ posted a comment on Friday 8th June 2007 9:39am

Great first chapter; I love the premise of this story. As another reviewer has pointed out, the implications of a merger are rather ... interesting to contemplate. I tend to be afraid of these sorts of stories just because so many of them get rather squicky for my tastes without warning, but I have faith that yours won't cause trouble in that regard. :-)

One thing - it's "ad nauseam", not "ad nauseum".

-- Josh

noylj posted a comment on Friday 8th June 2007 9:30am

Could you also fix the canon problem with patronuses?
Thank you.

KateHC posted a comment on Friday 8th June 2007 9:03am

I love this premiss. And, given that he is a teen-aged boy, Harry seems accepting of the weirdness of having his Mum dream about nursing him. Your Lily is a blast. I like her calling Remus John- RJ.

'Resistance is futile". LOL!

haphazard1 posted a comment on Friday 8th June 2007 8:50am

A very intriguing concept -- I've seen a number of James in/with Harry stories, but Lily in/with Harry should be quite a twist. A merger is likely to cause any number of problems, though.

Looking forward to seeing where you take this story.

nodrog451 posted a comment on Friday 8th June 2007 7:04am

Fun idea! However, I have to admit that I hope it turns into a longer story than just two or three chapters! Of course, if it does, I'll be left pining for more chapters over a longer period of time. But I'm willing to wait! Please update soon!

Tommy posted a comment on Friday 8th June 2007 7:00am

You are correct about the use of "c" instead of "x" in plural, but Rowling chose different. So, most likely, you'll find the next book talking about "Horcruxes" with an "X". Truth be told, while incorrect, the use of an "x" has a much better sound to it. "Horcruces" doesn't sound that scary, does it? *amused* Anyway, you can read about this at her homepage I think. She explained it there. I hope you'll update soon - I really liked this chapter.

May The Words Be With You!

Tommy A. L.
aka
Fanfix

AmeSuisei/AdronTaltos/CarlOort posted a comment on Friday 8th June 2007 6:40am

Definatly an interesting idea. Hope to see more of it.

aboulhosnc posted a comment on Friday 8th June 2007 6:22am

Have you ever thought that maybe the spelling would be different than your mexican town spelling. Obviously if it is spelled a certain way in the book than that is right and as always a magical word might not have the same spelling as regular muggle words

Crys posted a comment on Friday 8th June 2007 6:17am

This bunny is very familiar. Is it one of the various bunnies that got bandied about on the group?

At any rate, so far, so good.

Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Friday 8th June 2007 6:11am

Well, this is a different Lily comes back story, and I will be interested in what you do to make things go more and more, as well as how others might react to Harry/Lily, like if she were to meet Snape of Peter sometime. Looking good here.