These Dreams - Drabbles
Dream Drabble #1
By kokopelli
Reviews
Nanio posted a comment on Wednesday 8th February 2006 2:50pm for Dream Drabble #1
This is an enjoyable drabble. Quirky, teasing, and somewhat serious appears to be a great way to go.
Chris1 posted a comment on Tuesday 7th February 2006 5:41am for Dream Drabble #1
Wonderful little piece :) Now I'm curious about her outfit. Any hints?
Any chance of Hogwarts stories about their kids?
Patches posted a comment on Thursday 2nd February 2006 8:08am for Dream Drabble #1
Great finish! Thank you for writing "the rest of the story" About "These Dreams" story of Samantha and Harry. I like this ending Or should I say insight into the ongoing story of Harry and his loves.
Thanks for writing. I am continually amazed by the creative tallent that you are a member of.
Thank you for sharing with those of us less fortunate. I can't write but I'm so glad I can read and appreciate.
Alex13 posted a comment on Thursday 2nd February 2006 7:24am for Dream Drabble #1
Well, that was a nice little story.
Didn't really spot anything to criticise, and the whole discussion about the baby was nicely done. Soo... good work.
Jamey posted a comment on Thursday 2nd February 2006 4:19am for Dream Drabble #1
Short & sweet - the essence of elegence. Thanks! Truly awesome!
hedwig_edwiges posted a comment on Wednesday 1st February 2006 10:06pm for Dream Drabble #1
I really like this universe. I wouldn't complain a bit if you and Jeconais keep giving us a sample of it from time to time.
Gardengirl posted a comment on Wednesday 1st February 2006 2:54pm for Dream Drabble #1
I love it! What a woman... what a LUCKY woman. 'Course, he's pretty darn lucky too. Ah, happiness. Thanks, John!
Musings of Apathy posted a comment on Wednesday 1st February 2006 1:53pm for Dream Drabble #1
Excellent drabble. This series still has some good legs under it.
Thank you for writing.
Mike.
Olafr posted a comment on Wednesday 1st February 2006 1:15pm for Dream Drabble #1
Very nice indeed. The "talking heads" approach was rather interesting - by which I mean, this piece is very spare of description - but it takes the focus away from the place and concentrates our attention upon the relationship between the people - Harry and Sam.
I've enjoyed almost all your writings, and this one is no exception. Short stories support an intensity of expression that is difficult to sustain in a longer piece (and, to be frank, tiring to read) and I feel you've done that here very nicely.
Thanks for sharing with us,
- Olafr.
Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Wednesday 1st February 2006 12:09pm for Dream Drabble #1
*chuckle* Very nice piece with a delightful undertone of a happily-married couple still very much in love and lust with each other.
Loopy Dane posted a comment on Wednesday 1st February 2006 10:05am for Dream Drabble #1
I like!
Question; do Veela have problems with stretch marks and saggy breasts? Do they gain (and retain) baby hips? There may be spells or potions to take care of that kind of thing, but then why is Mrs. Weasley so plump and looking like she had 7 kids?
Just some odd thoughts that crossed my mind as I imagined middle-age "empty-nesters" planning more kids.
-Loopy
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Tuesday 21st March 2006 10:17am for Dream Drabble #1