By kokopelli
Reviews
hedwig_edwiges posted a comment on Friday 3rd February 2006 10:30am
Keep let loose the bits and I'll be ever grateful. Wonderful story and characters.
Prince Charon posted a comment on Friday 3rd February 2006 8:30am
Oh boy. Samantha and Gabrielle are going to have a long talk with their daughters.
Patches posted a comment on Thursday 2nd February 2006 8:08am
Great finish! Thank you for writing "the rest of the story" About "These Dreams" story of Samantha and Harry. I like this ending Or should I say insight into the ongoing story of Harry and his loves.
Thanks for writing. I am continually amazed by the creative tallent that you are a member of.
Thank you for sharing with those of us less fortunate. I can't write but I'm so glad I can read and appreciate.
Alex13 posted a comment on Thursday 2nd February 2006 7:24am
Well, that was a nice little story.
Didn't really spot anything to criticise, and the whole discussion about the baby was nicely done. Soo... good work.
Jamey posted a comment on Thursday 2nd February 2006 4:19am
Short & sweet - the essence of elegence. Thanks! Truly awesome!
hedwig_edwiges posted a comment on Wednesday 1st February 2006 10:06pm
I really like this universe. I wouldn't complain a bit if you and Jeconais keep giving us a sample of it from time to time.
Gardengirl posted a comment on Wednesday 1st February 2006 2:54pm
I love it! What a woman... what a LUCKY woman. 'Course, he's pretty darn lucky too. Ah, happiness. Thanks, John!
Musings of Apathy posted a comment on Wednesday 1st February 2006 1:53pm
Excellent drabble. This series still has some good legs under it.
Thank you for writing.
Mike.
Olafr posted a comment on Wednesday 1st February 2006 1:15pm
Very nice indeed. The "talking heads" approach was rather interesting - by which I mean, this piece is very spare of description - but it takes the focus away from the place and concentrates our attention upon the relationship between the people - Harry and Sam.
I've enjoyed almost all your writings, and this one is no exception. Short stories support an intensity of expression that is difficult to sustain in a longer piece (and, to be frank, tiring to read) and I feel you've done that here very nicely.
Thanks for sharing with us,
- Olafr.
Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Wednesday 1st February 2006 12:09pm
*chuckle* Very nice piece with a delightful undertone of a happily-married couple still very much in love and lust with each other.
Loopy Dane posted a comment on Wednesday 1st February 2006 10:05am
I like!
Question; do Veela have problems with stretch marks and saggy breasts? Do they gain (and retain) baby hips? There may be spells or potions to take care of that kind of thing, but then why is Mrs. Weasley so plump and looking like she had 7 kids?
Just some odd thoughts that crossed my mind as I imagined middle-age "empty-nesters" planning more kids.
-Loopy
Jason Fraser posted a comment on Friday 3rd February 2006 10:32am